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Elizabeth Marro's avatar

I love everything about this post. It's wonderful to be a witness to your journey as a writer from the earlier posts to your decision about where to focus. I sense that is exactly right for you because as you've continued your voice has strengthened with the confidence of someone who has found her path.

And yes, the separations and shorter paragraphs are great and they set your writing off perfectly. I came of age as a writer for newspapers where no paragraph was more than five sentences long. I sometimes violate that now but it is still ingrained in me my eye appreciates it too.

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Sarah Miller's avatar

I like the dividers and shorter paragraphs. I liked this whole post. I love reading your writing.

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